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The orange jumpsuit really didn't suit her complexion. But, then, they're not exactly intended to be fashion statements. The slow steps with which she moved, her lank hair and sunken cheeks weren't her either.
I frowned as she took a seat across from me, "What were you thinking?" I tried to sound curious instead of judgmental.
I needn't have tried. She simply lifted a shoulder listlessly, dismissing my question. "Nothing, really."
Her appearance already had me so shaken, her attitude disturbed me even more, "Then why?"
She lifted her eyes to meet mine, and there was such pain in their blue gray depths, so much strain that had pushed her to the breaking point, I had to look away. Shame that I hadn't seen her pain sooner filled me. Could I have helped? I had no way of knowing, but I wished I'd been able to try.
Her quiet voice emphasized the hopelessness of her response, "What's it matter?"
I frowned as she took a seat across from me, "What were you thinking?" I tried to sound curious instead of judgmental.
I needn't have tried. She simply lifted a shoulder listlessly, dismissing my question. "Nothing, really."
Her appearance already had me so shaken, her attitude disturbed me even more, "Then why?"
She lifted her eyes to meet mine, and there was such pain in their blue gray depths, so much strain that had pushed her to the breaking point, I had to look away. Shame that I hadn't seen her pain sooner filled me. Could I have helped? I had no way of knowing, but I wished I'd been able to try.
Her quiet voice emphasized the hopelessness of her response, "What's it matter?"
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"Seriously? How do those two stand it?" Billy asked himself mentally has he shifted his head slightly as he tried getting comfortable on
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A selfish wish.
Her eyes slowly opened from her deep slumber, allowing the swell of tears to freshly trail down her cheeks.
A pure wish.
While she slept, the voice of the Shikon no Tama repeated.
You must seek to undo such hatred.
Countless times the memory replayed itself as if begging her to understand.
That is what will determine the fate of this world.
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“Woah!” Azure yelped, falling on her backside, in a failed attempted to try and kick Samukai who managed to dodge the attack with little effort.
“Not quite there yet,” Samukai kindly said, “but you are getting there.”
To the random passerby, it would seem that the two were trying out martial arts for the first time. However, the real reason was that since the games were going to be atheltic based Azure and Summerfly needed to learn how to play sports while using their new bodies because, as Samukai quoted, ‘We would look highly suspicious if a cartazonon, a yell
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This was written for a challenge I posted in my journal a long time ago.
No one really took me up on the challenge until recently, when ~FLPQueen did with What was he thinking.
The challenge is here.
Just so you don't have to go following bunches of links, the summary of the challenge is this:
Dialogue all by itself is just like talking heads, as pointed out in *Auriethepixie's blog entry. You have to have action.
So, the challenge was to take a bit of dialogue I provided, and write it into a scene, just to show how many different ways the same dialogue can go.
The dialogue provided for the challenge was this:
"What were you thinking?"
"Nothing, really."
"Then why?"
"What's it matter?"
No one really took me up on the challenge until recently, when ~FLPQueen did with What was he thinking.
The challenge is here.
Just so you don't have to go following bunches of links, the summary of the challenge is this:
Dialogue all by itself is just like talking heads, as pointed out in *Auriethepixie's blog entry. You have to have action.
So, the challenge was to take a bit of dialogue I provided, and write it into a scene, just to show how many different ways the same dialogue can go.
The dialogue provided for the challenge was this:
"What were you thinking?"
"Nothing, really."
"Then why?"
"What's it matter?"
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I like this concept!